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In Your Wildest Dreams... by CatsareCuteWMKM In Your Wildest Dreams... by CatsareCuteWMKM
Thing I did in art class, with a little touch-up. It was supposed to be like a "group logo" design and they basically hate each other. Maybe I just didn't know who to draw completely. So, I decided to draw them in it. And with a banner that says "In Your Wildest Dreams".

Peridot, Clawdeen, Blackfire, Mouscedes. "Crossover" between Monster High, Steven Universe and Teen Titans. The mark that I got is level 4. 
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popeeyiffer Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2017  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
yo bro I found this piece last night and I was gonna write a critique but it was too late. Mind if i write a critique now?
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CatsareCuteWMKM Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay...
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popeeyiffer Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2017  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
Overall the piece is really nice and pleasing to look at, however there are a few minor flaws, let me go over pros and cons.

Pros
+The coloring is smooth and clean. There's no coloring going outside of the lines. I can see a few spots where you shade and its turning out really well! I recommend doing more difficult shading, like hair and such. You seem like youre ready to do that!
+The line art is clean and doesn't overlap where it shouldn't making it pleasing to look at. Its nowhere close to some of the bad lineart ive come across. The line art is super well done!

Cons
-The anatomy could use some work. The yellow skinned girl has oddly pointed shoulders. That might just be her character design though. All of their chins are also oddly pointy. I would recommend smoothing or rounding them out so they don't look as sharp. The eyes also are aligned quite right. what you should do is make two perfect lines (with a ruler) across the head so you can get the eyes the right shape. Then just erase them and they look perfect! 

There's not much else on this piece that is a con. It's very well made!
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CatsareCuteWMKM Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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